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Fantasy Revenge

October 28, 2019
By Anonymous

I was standing outside of my band class talking to Jeremy. He was asking me for advice about how to deal with Bob bullying him. He had come to ask me because he knew that I had dealt with bullying before when I was younger. He really wanted to know what to do, so I told him. All I could say was, “Just try to ignore him. If you ignore him he could come at you, but the more you ignore him, the less he will talk to you.”

Right after I said that, Bob came and shoved me out of the way just so he could talk to Jeremy. Jeremy didn’t talk to him and walked right passed Bob to talk to me. Bob was angry now so he pushed me out of the way, almost making me trip. I wanted to help Jeremy, so I got right in between Bob and Jeremy. Bob was really angry that he stuck his hand out and straight and choked me. When he choked me, he choked me with his two thumbs right on my esophagus. It felt like when you’re about to barf, but you hold it in. I put my hand on his trying to take his hand off. He choked me for a good 2 seconds. As soon as he let go, I fell straight to the ground coughing. Also having an asthma attack which made it worse.  I was taken to the nurse’s office immediately. I could barely talk and I laid on the nurse office bed trying to wrap my head around the thing that had just happened.

Since then, I’ve been planning what I want to get back at him. I wanted him to pay for what he did. I wanted to give him a taste of his own medicine. If I ever get the chance I would do this to Bob for everything he has done to me and others.


The author's comments:

For this set piece, I wanted to try to accomplish 1st person perspective. You would notice that throughout the story that their was part of self reflecting. I liked my 1st person perspective about when I got bullied because that really brings me back into my troubled youth.


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