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Cytus I-The Operators

February 13, 2015
By Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P


"We have completed it, sir." The dark haired woman clutches her notepad to her chest. "The very first one."

 

"Good job, Pulseva." The bright eyed scientist steps excitedly towards her. "And the lifespan?"

 

Pulseva allows herself a small grin of triumph. "Eternal."

 

The two walk quickly to a secluded room down a white corridor. On the way, the scientist poses complex questions regarding coding and biology. Pulseva does her best to answer them all until she finally opens the door of the room with one thin hand. The scientist gasps audibly at the wonder lying inside, greater than any treasure.

 

An android. Its body sleek and silver, accented in shades of blue, gracing the white sheets of the hospital bed. Wires entrap its arms, weaving together in a delicate corset at its back. Its eyelids are closed, one thin black disc on each representing lashes. Even the lips of the robot have been fitted with extreme detail, and overall, the result is a scaled human.

 

"What is her name?" the scientist breathes softly, awestruck.

 

"We have not yet decided, but Yu and Ani seem to prefer 'Ververg'," Pulseva answers. "The name has no meaning."

 

"Ververg," the scientist repeats. "Yes, her name shall be Ververg until we can transfer a human soul to her.

 

"Have you found any candidates yet?" he asks, turning back to Pulseva. She shakes her head. ExtenLife Corp. has been thus far unable to find anyone willing to give up human life for an eternal robotic one. Especially a robot so early in its testing stages, without the slightest glimpse of emotion or memory. So far, all that is certain is the term used for the robots- operators.


"Then the search continues," the scientist says, looking back at Ververg. "I want her alive as soon as possible."

 

"Why, she already is, sir," Pulseva answers, brushing a lock of her dark hair to the side and crossing the room easily. Her nimble fingers tap away at a thin tablet, pressing and holding different keys, sliding some across the screen, until a golden circle appears in the center.

 

"Activate Operator," Pulseva commands, voice shaking only slightly.

 

The scientist watches in awed silence as Ververg sits up, illuminated by the sunlight streaming through the windows. 

 

The first of the Operators.


The author's comments:

This is fanfiction for one of my favorite games, Cytus. You do not have to have played the game to read this, as I believe it is fairly explanatory of the storyline (or so I hope). Written while listening to Spectrum: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E8BNjdbWzV0


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on Apr. 3 2015 at 1:18 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you very much, Avenge. Yes, it is meant to be vague at this point, and details will appear.

on Apr. 3 2015 at 8:25 am
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
18 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts

It's a little vague, but I'm sure more details will make themselves known. Cool imagery!

on Mar. 13 2015 at 12:55 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you, Bree. Actually, the reader is around the same knowledge level as Vanessa is in this storyline, so as soon as she gets around to asking Sand some questions, everything mildly understandable will be explained. *pokes Vanessa*

on Mar. 12 2015 at 7:41 pm
BreeZephyr SILVER, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
7 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
“In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then in that very moment I also love him...it's impossible to really understand somebody, what they want, what they believe, and not love them the way they love themselves.” - Orson Scott Card, Ender's Game

Hey, this is cool! I won't say anything about adding detail because I bet you do that in the next part, which I'll definitely be reading. Can't wait to learn more about this group of characters. Great idea and great writing. :)

on Mar. 10 2015 at 12:59 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you, Ettie. I'll be sure to work more on that in coming chapters.

EttieGH GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2015 at 2:50 am
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
15 articles 2 photos 46 comments
It's a good start. I'd just suggest you add a little more detail, especially on the android's appearances. That way the reader will have a better picture of it.

on Mar. 9 2015 at 6:27 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you, WOWriting! I'm trying to type quickly *writes fourth chapter furiously*

on Mar. 9 2015 at 4:20 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Really intriguing. The beginning didn't hook me in, but the sharp, slightly sinister description of the robot made me sit up straighter. Actually love this, definitely reading on!

on Mar. 4 2015 at 10:03 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you for both comments.

on Mar. 4 2015 at 10:02 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Thank you, Jamie.

on Mar. 4 2015 at 8:36 am
CNBono17 SILVER, Rural, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lego ergo sum (Latin—I read, therefore, I am)
The pen is mightier than the sword—unknown
Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith, and in purity—1 Timothy 4:12

Intriguing. I'll drop an actual feedback comment on the third one.

jamie. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 4 2015 at 7:58 am
jamie. BRONZE, Masfield, Ohio
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It is really good

on Feb. 22 2015 at 1:00 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I am actually currently getting ready to write the fourth chapter, so thank you for showing interest.

on Feb. 21 2015 at 7:33 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
ohh I like this already, It is so interesting and I just want to read more and more.