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Goodbye, Leo Valdez

November 10, 2013
By writesomethingalways PLATINUM, Pueblo West, Colorado
writesomethingalways PLATINUM, Pueblo West, Colorado
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"Either write something worth reading, or do something worth writing." ~Benjamin Franklin

They all knew what needed to happen, but they couldn't bring themselves to make a decision like that. The Doors had to be closed from both sides. Someone would be trapped in Tartarus.

Nico wanted to help, but even being this close to Tartarus again made him feel dizzy and weak. He couldn't force himself to go back there. Never again. At the same time, he couldn't bear the thought of any of his friends being forced to spend eternity there. He wasn't sure he'd be able to willingly let any of them spend even a few minutes in there.

The way Percy and Annabeth clung together, it was clear that they would not consider letting each other go back there, either. Looking around, Nico realized that this would be much more difficult than he had ever imagined, deciding who would close the doors. Jason and Piper stood with their arms around each other. Frank and Hazel held hands.

Nico's eyes settled on Leo, standing alone, staring at the doors. The choice was clear. If only one person was to close the doors, it was to be either Nico or Leo. They both knew it. Nico stepped forward, towards the doors, taking a deep breath. As soon as she saw his intentions, Hazel flew forward, clinging to his wrist.

"No," she said firmly, looking him in the eyes. "You have sacrificed enough for us."

He exchanged a glance with Leo. Leo stepped forward and put a hand on Hazel's shoulder. "Hazel, one of us has to do this."

She turned towards Leo, tears filling her eyes. "Leo, no! I won't let you do it! Neither of you!"

Leo held her close to him, wrapping his arms around her. He glanced at Frank, who nodded softly. Hazel sobbed into Leo's chest for a while, then pulled her head out and wiped her eyes. "I'll go."

They all stared at her in shock. Frank started to rush forward, but she held out her hand to stop him, ripping herself from Leo's arms. With strength in her eyes that seemed out of place behind her tears, she insisted, "I will close the Doors of Death. Hades brought me back to life to help with this quest, and I have done what I can. It's not natural for dead people to walk the Earth. I think this is my time to return to the grave."

Nico admired her bravery. He knew she was now determined, and he might have let her go, but he never had to. Leo must have also seen that Hazel would not be convinced to let him go in her place, so he did what Nico had not had the bravery to do.

By the time Hazel realized what had happened, it was too late. She screamed and tried to run through the Doors after Leo, but Nico held her back.

Leo smiled a regretful smile, then grinned wide at Hazel. "I'll be the hottest monster in all of Tartarus!"

Still smiling his elfish grin, he placed and hand on each door and gently closed them in front of him. The remaining seven demigods stared at the Doors in shock. Not a single one had dry eyes- even Frank was more upset than he had ever been.

Hazel fell to her knees in front of the Doors and placed her hand where the opening had been, though which she had seen her last glimpse of Leo. "Goodbye, Leo Valdez."

The author's comments:
Before I read the latest book in Rick Riordan's Heroes of Olympus series, House of Hades, I came up with my own theory of what would happen at the Doors of Death.

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on Feb. 21 2015 at 9:17 am
Noooooo leeeeooooo you didn't say goodbye to fetus....!!!

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Oh no. This is too good. I'm crying. Why am I crying? Leeeoooooo... nooooooooooooooooooo.