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Special part I

May 6, 2010
By poisionWriter SILVER, Idaho Falls, Idaho
poisionWriter SILVER, Idaho Falls, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think I love you.

There was a flash, there was a bang, there was a scream, there was darkness, there was a bright light, and then, there was God.
And God said, “Don’t worry, be happy.”
And then there was darkness once more, then upon my ears I heard sirens and upon my closed eye lids I saw flashing red and blue, then nothingness.

“ID?” I heard a deep voice say.
“None, no wallet either.” A softer male voice replied.
“You think she was robbed?” a women’s voice asked.
“Not likely.” The deep voice.
I did not move or make a sound, but listened to the things around me. I heard a beeping of a heart monitor in the background, muffled voices that sounded as if they were coming from behind a thin wall, and cars driving on their busy way on a nearby road. I felt scratchy starched sheets on my bare legs and arms and a not-so-soft pillow under my head and neck. Something was putting pressure on my index finger, and my body ached everywhere.
“Has anyone filed a missing persons report within the past 48 hours?” the man with the soft voice asked.
“No,” the woman.
“Any leads?” the soft voice.
“Not much that could be used.” The deep voice.
“What about the press?” soft voice.
“Haven’t asked a single thing, haven’t posted a single thing.” Deep voice.
“Strange,” the woman said mainly to herself.
“Very, the press is always buzzing around everything.” Soft male voice. “Has the department issued a found persons report?”
“None,” deep voice.
“So to recap we know nothing.” Soft male voice.
“Pretty much.” Deep voice.
I heard footsteps, a door open then close, then nothing but the silent buzzing of the room.

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on Jul. 12 2011 at 10:05 pm
poisionWriter SILVER, Idaho Falls, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think I love you.

im glad you like it. thanks for letting me know. for a while there no one was saying anything, so i stopped writting the series.

on Jul. 11 2011 at 11:49 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"

Ooooooh, I am intrigued!!! I love the beginning :D

Andersonandy said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 3:47 pm
Andersonandy, Homosassa, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is a concept by which we measure our pain. (John Lennon)

I like it all. And really like the part about god. I have no advice for this one.

on May. 24 2010 at 10:28 am
WildFlOwEr1221 BRONZE, Walnut Cove, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
the reason i punched the review mirror with her fist is cause starting now im never looking back

that is really good cant wait to see more


Venus_Queen said...
on May. 18 2010 at 8:31 pm
This was really good! :}

EllieK. BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2010 at 9:24 pm
EllieK. BRONZE, Wilmette, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all who wander are lost"
JRR Tolkien

"Sometimes life sucks, so suck it up"

""We succeeded in taking that picture (from deep space), and if you look a it, you see a dot. Thats here. That's home. Thats us. On it, everyone you ever heard of