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Unexpected Plot Twist

July 22, 2021
By WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.<br /> <br /> A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings<br /> <br /> Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin<br /> <br /> A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt<br /> <br /> Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me


Hey. 

 

Once upon a time...


Don’t all good stories start that way? True, not necessarily.


One dark and stormy night…


Better? Cheesy, I know. But still… Which one should we go with?


Wait! Just thought of another one.


A long time ago…


Yeah, we’ll go with that one.


A long time ago, in a land far, far away, there lived a…


What? Let’s see. Wolf pack. Meh, not feelin it. Girl. Hmm. Why not?


A long time ago, in a land far, far away, there lived a girl. 


Okay, that’s a lame, cheesy beginning… Oh well. We’ll keep it, but I’ll stray from that format now. But should I do third person, second person, or first person? Well, I’m the narrator, so… Smugness :) It’ll be…. I forget which is the narrator, but that one. Can I publish this if I forget the persons?      ...hopefully :/


This story starts, looking down on a mansion. The girl, whose name is…


Brenda? Bertha? Bob? Delia? Rebbeca? No...I want something a heroine would have, and feminine and stuff Lavender! Violet! Which one? I’m gonna say… Violet. So,


A long time ago, in a land far, far away, there lived a girl. This story starts, looking down on a mansion. The girl, whose name is Violet, stands in a light blue, beautiful flowing gown. She looks beautiful. 


What next? Let’s see… Um, how about...Plot twist. But what to twist? There is no plot yet. :/   Okay! Got it!


She looks beautiful. Next to her, a rowdy puppy plays happily. Did I mention she’s standing in a meadow behind the mansion? She is.


Hmm. Oh!

 Also, she’s holding a bag. Inside...ARE STOLEN JEWELS!!


To dramatic? Ha! Though she was a good guy, huh? *more smugness* Fine, no plot twists.


She looks beautiful. Next to her, a rowdy puppy plays happily. Did I mention she’s standing in a meadow behind the mansion? She is. Also, she’s holding a bag. Inside...ARE STOLEN JEWELS!! 


Also, she’s holding a bag, which has a few books. Don’t worry. They’re not for reading. You’ll see.


Or not im bored


bye yall



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on Aug. 2 2021 at 4:39 pm
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.<br /> <br /> A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings<br /> <br /> Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin<br /> <br /> A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt<br /> <br /> Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

@SparrowSun

XD

ive been wearing my shirt for (hmmm let's see ill estimate)

maybe you dont want to know

i mean its not dirty and im not in school just staying home all day

so what's the point, right?

Also, JustME_Vannya, thank you :)

on Jul. 30 2021 at 9:34 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

haha thats great!
your user change is crazy ll never remember it(I'm wearing a wolf t-shirt right now... i may or may not have been wearing it for... what is it now? 3 days?).

on Jul. 30 2021 at 8:56 am
JustMe_Vaanya SILVER, Dehradun, Other
7 articles 9 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Una Vida, I have come to accept that I cant experience everything in life. But what I will, I'll experience deeply..."<br /> -Shivya Nath

XD That is soo relatable and a very nice piece... I'm still laughing! Even I used to think like this. Btw, this writing style so very resembles Pseudonymous Bosch's! Oh, I'm adding it to favorites right away..!

on Jul. 29 2021 at 5:33 pm
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.<br /> <br /> A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings<br /> <br /> Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin<br /> <br /> A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt<br /> <br /> Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

@Crazywolfiegirl2

I just did check out your stories! LOVE the animal ones.

on Jul. 29 2021 at 3:48 pm
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
26 articles 3 photos 284 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

🤣😂I loved this, pretty much sums up my 7-year-old self when I want to write a story 😂🤣 (and sort of myself now, I'll admit it). I have got through a few stories tho. A few r on teenink, maybe u could check them out? (Ok, some of them are awful, but a few are good, you just have to find the right one, all depends on my level of boredom really) well I've probably said enough now so bye!