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Desert clip
November 25, 2010
He slid off the dusty roof and onto his horse, looking around the silent alley. His horse, a black mustange with blood red eyes, stomped the ground impaitently awaiting the coming race against death. The sun beat doown on the cowboy's hat; he narrowed his shaded blue eyes. Silently the small breeze whispered in his ear. It was time. The devil horwe reared up as he kicked 'em into motion. They raced out of the alley and into the open desert in their racing dance with death
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MidnightFire said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:56 pm
exactly i think that eventually the english language is just going to be txt talk
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 9:18 pm
very tru! in fact, we use it less and less in anything we do, electronicaly that is. people on teen ink are useualy okay, though--they at least make an effort, while on some sites it is clare that the writer doesn't care at all.
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:00 pm
ya and sometimes you spell a word right but use it wrong grammerly like with their, there and they're :) why does grammer have to bee so complicated, we don't even use it right when we talk to each other
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:03 pm
oh, no--i didn't mean for you to start fussing with it! it is amazing as is--the worst thing you can do is judge a peice by its mistakes. i have a terrible habit of repeating myself in my comments so i was looking for something uniue to point out--spelling typos are not uniue to any of us, though, i don't think.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:45 pm
haha aren't animals beautiful bugs aren't for everyone keep up the good work
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 10:22 am
thanks :) my dad grew up always having a cat or a cat with kittens and my mom grew up always having a dog and loving horses. So i grew up with all three around and now i love all animals ... except bugs and snakes, snakes are cool looking but i watched to much Animal Planet growing up :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:14 pm
are u an animal person... i love horses i always wanted one but i don't live where they are this is great i love your little descriptions they leave me wanting more :P
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 8:51 pm
i just reread that and realized i misspelled a lot, even horse i spelled horwe ... my family owns a horse and i still spelled it wrong ... wow i guess i didn't spell check this one (:
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2011 at 2:45 pm
shadowy--there is no need for answers or even questions. you are missing some punctuation.
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