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Suicide Story

March 15, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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So adrenaline
Holds your brain hostage. You slit.
End of the story.

© Ashley W., Port Charlotte, FL

The author's comments:
Somebody said - 'don't do anything stupid and permanent for something that is temporary'
Very true.
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maryannn PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 28 2022 at 1:32 pm
maryannn PLATINUM, Sacramento, California
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"don't let it define you"

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simple, but to the point fr
Anna_993 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 17 2021 at 9:46 am
Anna_993 BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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If life were predictable it would cease to be life, and be without flavor.

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It was so deep with such simple words
ExistanceOnMars said...
on Jan. 6 2017 at 10:24 am
ExistanceOnMars,
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I like the simplicity of this, it really hits close to home
Savannah457 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 14 2014 at 2:39 pm
Savannah457 PLATINUM, Hood River, Oregon
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"A great day to walk off the earth" ~ myself

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This is a good poem. Put into so little words, pain is a way out, but pain is also a way in.
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:38 pm
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

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Me gusta! Though that's really strange to say for a poem like this... *rethinks wording* Well presented!
hemingways_daughter DIAMOND said...
on May. 4 2013 at 11:58 am
hemingways_daughter DIAMOND, London, Other
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'Lock up your libraries if you like; but there is no gate, no lock, no bolt that you can set upon the freedom of my mind.'
― Virginia Woolf, 'A Room of One's Own'

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oh, that's terrrible..ly beautiful. x
MissLizzieGirl GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 7:32 pm
MissLizzieGirl GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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It is all there. It emphasizes that suicide happens so quick. You never really think. She'll be here one day and dead the next.
GleekGamer PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 11:20 am
GleekGamer PLATINUM, Somerset, New Jersey
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Fantastic. So much emotion in so few words!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 4:05 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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Pithy. But with a grand and straightforward message. And the image gives this bonus points from me.
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 1:38 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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Oh, You're Welcome!
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:21 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thanks :).
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:20 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thanks :).
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:19 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thanks :) .
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:18 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thank you :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:18 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thank you :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:17 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thank you :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:17 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thank you :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:16 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thank you :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:16 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thank you, saphira :)
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 10:15 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

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Thanks :) .